Exercise 1

1. Because Luke has been working so hard with Yoda, he expects to earn his Jedi status. 

2. Han Solo, is without a doubt the most complex character in Star Wars, however, Boba Fett and Darth Maul have also been fascinating to fans for years, because their past is largely unknown, both characters could be developed more in future stories. 

3. I like to watch television, attend films, and read but, what I enjoy most is the Star Wars collectible card game. 

4. Leia, you can contact me at 444 Wise Avenue Seattle, Washington. 

5. Chekhov knew the answers, because he had studied so hard and listened carefully to his superior officers. 

6. Captain Kirk said, “I’ll never understand why Klingons agree to summits and then never show up, it seems at the very least that they would send an emissary but, they can’t even do that.” 

7. No one in Luke’s family, except for his grandmother, knows how to make bantha stew. 

8. Obi-Wan Kenobi, a vegetarian has always been healthy and energetic, in fact he still spars and lives on his own at the age of 88, which is remarkable. 

9. The teachers that I like, are the ones who take the time to answer questions like Yoda. 

10. “I am fairly sure Chewbacca, that you will find a good job in the field of engineering”, said Randall, the job placement counselor. 

11. Although Uncle Owen has been working hard on his moisture vaporators, he still needs to plant more trees, shrubs, and flowers before it will look as nice as his neighbors’ yards. 

12. The new roof will be put on the Death Star next week and the loading dock will be painted soon but, the primary weapon which needs a new power source won’t be operational until next month. 

13. Correct

14. Anakin Skywalker, my two-year-old, is very curious so I have to keep a close eye on him. 

15. Two others in the theater, not just you, complained about that annoying Jar Jar Binks.

Exercise 2

1 Correct

2. Oil, which is lighter than water, rises to the surface.

3.  Madame de Stael, was an attractive gracious lady.

4.  Nice, is a word with many meanings and some of them are contradictory.

5.  Correct

6.Correct

7   Taxicabs, that are dirty, are illegal in some cities.

8.  The closet contained worn clothes, old shoes, and dirty hats.

9.  The uninvited guest, wore a dark blue tweed suit.

10.  After surviving this ordeal, the trapper felt relieved.

11.  Mark Twain's early novels, I believe, stand the test of time.

12.  December 7 ,1941 ,will never be forgotten.

13.  The field was safe enough, wasn't it?

14.  Write the editor of the Atlantic 8 Arlington Street, Boston, Massachusetts 02116.

15.  He replied, "I have no idea what you mean."

16.  Correct

17.  Because of their opposition to institutions that force creatures to live in captivity, some people refuse to go to the zoo.

18. Correct

19.  Vests, which were once popular, have been out of vogue for several years.

20. As a celestial goddess, she regulated the course of the heavenly bodies and controlled the alternating seasons.

Exercise 3

1. The problems involved in this operation, are, I think numerous.
2. Celene, who does not usually tell anyone what she feels, said she didn't want to go to the dance.
3. To get tickets for some Broadway musicals, one has to order three months in advance.
4. Listening to the radio, Jun heard an announcement that Spangler, his own dog was lost.
5. I used to live at 16689 Sutton Avenue, Milpitas, California but we have since moved to 1895 Holland Way, Dubuque, Iowa.
6. The Valley of the Moon, the name of a section in Napa County California, is the heart of the state's wine producing area.
7. Chris did not see how he could organize, write, and proofread this paper in only two hours.
said she didn't want to go to the dance.
3. To get tickets for some Broadway musicals, one has to order three months in advance.
4. Listening to the radio, Jun heard an announcement that Spangler, his own dog was lost.
5. I used to live at 16689 Sutton Avenue, Milpitas, California but we have since moved to 1895 Holland Way, Dubuque, Iowa.
6. The Valley of the Moon, the name of a section in Napa County California, is the heart of the state's wine producing area.
7. Chris did not see how he could organize, write, and proofread this paper in only two hours.
8. By the pilings of the old pier, I found four starfish, a clam, and a sea anemone.
9. Yes, Helen did mention that all three of you were coming for lunch.

10. I believe therefore, that fraternities are good influences on a college campus.

Exercise 4

Paragraph 1

Tonight after school, we have our final soccer game of the season. Our coach Mr. Jones stated, “I want all of you to play your best and play fair.” The game started. We knew if we didn’t play aggressively we would lose. At half time our opponents were ahead by two. Shortly after, we managed to tie the game.

We had very little time left and knew we had to play well. The audience was cheering loudly, they could feel the tension in the air. Dean, our captain, called a time out. We gathered around and our coach said, “You can do it play smart!” We didn’t want to let our coach or fans down. Just then, Dean kicked the ball, the crowd went wild. The ball went right through the net. Just then, the buzzer went to signal the end of the game! Much to our surprise, we won in the last two minutes of the game!

Paragraph 2

If you want to know where to buy the most amazing ice cream in the state of Texas, I can tell you. Amy's ice cream, owned by my cousin, has the creamiest most flavorful ice cream in the South. She offers some really exotic flavors, like stinky fruit swirl and chocolate covered grasshopper delight, but she also offers normal flavors like chocolate, vanilla, strawberry, etc. This variety is what makes her shop so popular. If you are ever in Houston, you need to be sure and stop in for a taste. She is located at 298 Wesson Avenue, Houston, Texas. You won't be disappointed.

Martin Luther King Jr. appeals to ethos by stating facts about how after hundreds of years "the negro still isn't free from segregation". He also mentions the Constitution . He appeals to pathos by making the fight for freedom clear to the audience. He draws emotion from the white and blacks by mentioning he wants his children to live in a nation where his kids wont be judged by their skin color. Im not to sure how he appeals to logos........:/

1.       Schlosser assumes that his readers have been in that situation, his audience is most likely to everyone in general, but mostly parents. He mentions a lot about children and their parents. The benefits of targeting this audience could open up parent’s eyes of what social media is doing to their children. The risks could be bad reviews because parents don’t want to think they are not raising their children properly.

2.       Schlosser seemed to be semi persuasive, he had a lot of facts in the article but a lot of beliefs and opinions as well.

Ethos-Schlosser believes that social media is affecting kids more than it is to adults. This makes a good argument because it’s easy for people to disagree about an opinion.

Pathos-Parents feel bad that they can’t spend more time with their children so they spend more money on them. It’s a good argument because people can explain why they parents don’t have time for their children, and why they spend more money on their children.

Logos-Most kids nowadays spend most of their time inside watching TV, playing with apps on tablets or cellphones, rather than playing outside. This makes a good argument because people can share opinions on why kids nowadays are like this.

Exercise 28.5

1.       Many colleges have started campus garden programs that aim to teach students about the benefits of sustainable farming methods, and locally grown food.

2.       These gardens use organic farming techniques, and also provide fresh produce for the college cafeteria.

3.       A garden big enough to grow produce for a college cafeteria requires a large piece of land.

4.       A garden also needs a leader who can choose crops that will thrive in local growing conditions.

5.       Volunteers willing to work in the garden every week are essential.

6.       Some campus gardeners distribute produce to people in the community, who live far from a grocery store.

7.       Correct

8.       The colleges may distribute produce with special trucks, or “veggie wagons” that drive through the urban neighborhoods.

9.       The wagons deliver produce once a week, although they may make two deliveries during peak harvest time.

1.   A community garden planted during the academic year will fare better in southern states, where the growing season is longer than northern states.

Exercise 28.6

1.       American colonists first imported pasta from the English, who they had discovered it as tourists in Italy.

2.       The English, who were called macaronis because of their fancy airs, were returning from their grand tours of Italy.

3.       A hair style, with elaborate curls, was also called macaroni.

4.       The song “Yankee Doodle” refers to this hairdo, when it reports that Yankee Doodle “stuck a feather in his cap and called it macaroni.

5.       The song, a creation of the English, was actually intended to poke fun at unrefined American Colonists.

Exercise 28.7

1.       Prices have risen rapidly, the government debated a price freeze.

2.       A price freeze, unlike a rise in interest rates seemed a sure solution.

3.       The President would have to persuade businesses to accept a price freeze, his methods depending on their resistance.

4.       No doubt the President, his advisers having urged it, would first try a patriotic appeal.

5.       The President, not his advisers, insisted on negotiations with businesses.

             First, Ethos is when you write an essay, argument, or passage based on your beliefs. It could also be when you choose to believe an argument or not based on who wrote it. To appeal to ethos, Find a topic your readers will find fair with you explaining. Also, provide good evidence in appealing to ethos. Having different viewpoints and viewing situations others would is important.
            Second, pathos is when people are struck by emotions or a reasonable argument. Appealing to pathos is an important part of an argument. It brings out emotion in our readers, that will make readers agree with you. In appealing to pathos, explain what you believe in. State your common beliefs with your readers. Dramatic words, sarcasm, and exaggeration can affect your writing.
            Last, logos is when you use logical information and evidence in a situation.  Ethos and pathos are involved when writing a logos passage. When appealing to logos let it be known that your statements are true. Be sure that you evidence is precise and that your conclusion uses proficient words and evidence that lead to your conclusion.

Exercise 1
1. T
2. NT
3.NT
4.NT
5. NT
6.T
7.T
8.T
9.NT
10. T

Exercise 2
1. GT
2 NGT
3. GT
4.NGT
5. GT
6.NGT
7.GT
8.NGT
9.GT
10. NGT

Exercise 3

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4.Thirst is harder to endure than hunger, hunger can be endured by eating a meal, rather than thirst being quenches by a cup of water.
6.Jogging can add years to one's life, this is why exercise is so important in our lives.
8.The way people shake hands can reveal something about their characters, which is important to be professional to make a first good impression.
10.In Moby Dick, Melville did an amazing job at making it one of the most strangest and wonderful books in the world.

                To begin with in summarizing Chapter 5 From Formulating to Developing a Thesis, A thesis is a statement that a writer makes at the start of what they are about to write, The thesis tells what the whole essay is mainly about, it is usually the main idea of the passage. To support the thesis, the writer will include many examples. A working thesis, helps writers to read selectively, also its a first try at an assertion of your point of view. A working thesis shouldn't be the final product, it should be edited and reviewed. There are three models that can help develop a thesis, and those are the Correcting-Misinterpretations Model, Filling-the-Gap Model, and Modifying-What-Others-Have-Said Model. The correcting-misinterpretations model corrects a writer that misunderstands different sides of a subject. The Filling-the Gap Model shows writers what they have failed to notice when deliberating a matter. The Modifying-What-Others-Have-Said Model is when writers assume that a common understanding of an issue is likely. Next, a context is needed for the writers claim, it makes the topic of the conversation, it shows that you are familiar with the topic. When stating your thesis, it helps readers see your reasoning. There are some words than can cause trouble thesis statements, these words are although, though, but, however, and yet. There are many different strategies of formulating to developing a thesis, following these models and tips could lead to an efficient thesis.

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