Comma
Usage Exercise 2
Please add commas
wherever they are necessary.
Norman Bethune, a Canadian doctor, became a famous Canadian who is better
known outside of Canada, than in it. Bethune was born in Gravenhurst, Ontario,
in 1890. As a young man he studied medicine, and in 1917 he became a doctor. At
the age of 36 he was stricken with tuberculosis, a devastating lung disease. He
spent about a year recovering and subsequently won worldwide fame for his
experiments in lung surgery, and for his invention of instruments used in chest
surgery. In 1936, Bethune joined the Republican Army in the Spanish Civil War.
When he developed the first mobile blood transfusion service in history, his
fame around the world increased. The blood transfusion service allowed doctors
for the first time, to provide significant treatment to soldiers near battle
fronts. In 1938 , Bethune went to China, which was at war with Japan. Bethune
organized field hospitals, served as a battle surgeon, and set up medical
schools to train Chinese surgeons. In November, 1938, he became medical chief of
the Chinese Eighth Route Army. Unfortunately in 1939, after only 21 months in China
Bethune died of blood poisoning. Despite Bethune’s major medical innovations,
most Canadians have never heard of him. However; he is considered a national
hero in China, and is well known in many other parts of the world.
Lisette --
ReplyDeleteI'm definitely seeing improvement, but you are still have some issues with introductory phrases. Please review that concept before the final.
Thanks,
Nick
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